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Creativefoo
Male • 28 • Studio City , CA • United States
I'm into... Writing Photography Music Film and Video Acting Activism
Male • 28 • Studio City , CA • United States
I'm into... Writing Photography Music Film and Video Acting Activism
interests.
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Film
Books
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about me.
A washed out banker trying to find meaning to his existence. I can strongly relate to the quarterlife crossroads. I'm now 27yo and have only just begun the journey of self discovery. In plain words, i have wasted the last 27 years of my life. But I'm confident that by staying hungry and foolish, something good will come out of it.


1. The vocals, overall, have a reverb quality to it that sounds as though it was recorded in a room or hallway. The office scene seemed to have especially intense echoes. The soundtrack, I thought, was a little too loud, and kind of "too much," too intentionally "intense."
2. The guy's best friend was too whiny for my tastes.
2a. I wanted to see the main character get more bold, more extreme in his self-destruction. He's got a loving wife, an obviously high-paying job, he clearly loves risks & risktaking (as evidenced by his stock-trading, I think), so I really wanted more of the underbelly of his life -- that was when I got very interested.
3. The ending ... I have mixed feelings about it. One the one hand, this is obviously a verité/naturalistic film, based heavily on day-to-day events (ie, going to a bar, having a drink, snorting a line of coke, etc.) this is good. then the ending goes in a bombastic crime-fiction direction. my criticism would be that it seems to be a big departure from what the film was, leading up to that point. there's just a discrepancy -- IMO -- between the ending and the rest of the story that just wasn't gelling for me.
All these things said, it's still coooool that you managed to make a film, and I look forward to seeing what you do next.