Nbleak21 Male • 21 • Cookeville, TN  • United States
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I am a: College student. Citizen Soldier. Photographer. Poet. Awful Musician. Master of Procrastination. Master of Manipulation. A hero in Disguise.

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May 08, 2008 - 06:25 PM PST
allsmiles
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I keep rereading this, finding a new meaning hidden for myself in these words everytime. Well done.
Mar 08, 2008 - 01:13 PM PST
semperamo
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That sounds awesome! I really like the pace of the whole thing and the intro really sucks you in.

Can't wait for lyrics
Mar 06, 2008 - 02:23 AM PST
IwannaSaveuSoCo
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Nbleak21
lol no no soco is for something corporate its a band. i dont like soco unless its in a short or something.
Mar 04, 2008 - 08:10 AM PST
thecolorteale
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Nbleak21
So you left a comment on my page and I am late to reply but oh well.
When I was younger I hated the color teal as well. I thought it was tacky. But now I love it. But see....my name is Teale soooo I kind of should atleast like the color or I would hate my name. :D
Mar 04, 2008 - 07:48 AM PST
possibly_sane21
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Nbleak21
The underground? It's basically a subway. I just love it because you can get on and go virtually anywhere in the city. I know that sucker like the back of my hand and I've only been there all together a month and a half. So many people get on, all different walks of life from barristers and doctors to nannies to school children to tourists to even the damn prime minster. Everyone uses it and it's efficient (when it wants to be. Let's not get too carried away). I wish they had an underground almost everywhere. I don't know why I'm so facinated with it.
Mar 02, 2008 - 02:44 PM PST
possibly_sane21
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Nbleak21
London: fast-paced, uncensored, amazing, different yet not too different, accents, rain, sunshine, the underground, the transit system, the sights, the plentiful theatre, the amazing artists, the tea, the scones, the shopping, the sights, the people, the accents....... Let's just say if I could only live in one place and never leave, that is where I'd live. Yes, pricey, sometimes crammed, gritty, polluted, but it is one of the most amazing cities I've ever been to. Did I sell it?
Feb 29, 2008 - 01:33 PM PST
amandalane
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Great, almost forgot you were speaking of coffee.
Feb 28, 2008 - 11:26 PM PST
writtenonthecor
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I liked it. I thought the misspelling of throat in the beginning of the poem was strangely effective - like a mix between throat and thought.
Feb 28, 2008 - 06:11 PM PST
Ryin
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Nice. How long have you been playing and oh yeah nice tattoo.


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illuminated by his lamp...

Feb 28, 2008

illuminated by his lamp
he sits, he sips...
sips on the life not his.
nose in his book
noise in his ears,
rather opposing forms of media he injest for his nightly fix
the coffee seethes his throught and soothes his soul.

reading what he knows not,
listening to what he knows well...
his head bobs to the beat,
up and down,
up and down.

breathing is a form of art for him
his existance is worth nill...
he's not doin it for himself,
college. a career.
catering to society around him.

he Isolates himself,
his music,
the author's words,
the though of being anything differant
then what he is...

this is his life,
the way he lives.
the way he has to love.
its an infatuation, not love.
he wouldnt be here, wouldnt be doing this
if it werent for them

them.
the people of the world... the american dream
6 figures with change to spend.
a utopic society where ignorance runs rampid
and presidents send troops of to their death

its for a just cause, all of this... to keep them alive
to keep them breathing, keep us greeving
and groveling
and hoping for a chance to transpire
into a world not so much like our own.

it is us, the cannobolic society of america
we eat and feed and frolic and die
a never ending cycle in which we try
try to hold on,
try to fight,
fight for a world that isnt what's in sight.

failure is indeffinate
termination ineveitable
these are the evils in which we
embellish and reveal.


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