adaypastdead (Bob Miller) Male 18 el dorado hills, CA United States
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Status... Single
Orientation... Straight
I'm here for... Friends, Love, Art and Contacts
I'm into... Writing Dance Photography Music Film Activism Love Mind
I'm working on... Finding myself in a world full of distractions.
My Profiles... http://www.myspace.com/adaypastdead
Love Life, for if it should ever leave you, it won't be back.

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May 01 2008 - 8:31 AM PST
pamelalynn
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wow! that's really wonderful!
April 30 2008 - 1:39 PM PST
justpeachy
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Completely and totally amazing.
April 30 2008 - 1:27 PM PST
justpeachy
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the four last lines are my absolute favorite.
April 28 2008 - 4:17 PM PST
andreastem500
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thats amazing you just made my day!:)
April 24 2008 - 7:36 PM PST
chipmunk
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beautiful and amazing...
April 24 2008 - 9:25 AM PST
peacegal
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Beautiful, this actually puts in my mind a friend who is going thru a situation right now!! I love ur words :)
April 03 2008 - 6:45 PM PST
amlostinlife
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hey. i read s few of your works, and i think you are a really good writer... just wanted to say that. ;) -ashley
March 08 2008 - 8:27 PM PST
devonair
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We are a revoulution: An attempt at slam poetry.

April 29, 2008

What is life but a conscience composition?
We broke the waking dream and made the world listen,
our good glistens,
like badges of the heart,
i'm screaming rhyme schemes as an action of my art,
an artist acts on artistic vision,
in a prison of
mind
body
and holy mother earth,
the workers provisions
burning up inside a hearth,
hark! yet!
what is that we hear?
the world whispers white lies within our ear,
and its our only fear
that it wont be here,
we got tomorrow,
pray for months,
and hope we get a year,
a single tear,
drops onto the pillow,
the cold side is the best,
like the earth it turns,
and we lay down to rest,
restlessly repeating rotations,
as we resemble rainbow trout,
and dream what life's about,
writing rabid words while sitting,
all the notes i'm hitting,
i find it fitting,
the the flow within me found,
some noises to escape me,
and turn them in to sound,
a full file of fire like words,
adjectives, nouns and occasional verbs,
If metaphors are medicine I over medicate,
stupidity's a sickness for which I have escaped,
Equality's a nightmare to the man in power,
exploiting all we do by paying by the hour,
treated as parking meters,
driven like two seaters,
a world of meat eaters,
and cannibals,
I'd eat a man alive, but I'd never hurt an animal,
intangible lyrics
that never break or bend
the outcome is the same as we all die in the end,
so don't depend on deities,
doubt all duties told,
we are a revolution our souls cannot be sold,
our statement must be bold,
our will will break the mold,
WE ARE A REVOLUTION AND OUR SOULS WILL NEVER EVER IN THIS TIME OR ANY OTHER,
be sold,
and by the way,
your dinners getting cold.

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So, I guess this is where I am supposed to tell the world about who I am, my ambitions and my life story, but I don't want to bore you and have you flee from my page. I want you to stay, I want you to give my works a chance. I may be lazy, laid back, and for the most part care-free, but I want my works to be appreciated, and given constructive criticism, I want to build my talents, and in a community filled with independent artist this should be an easier task.


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