banakiwi Male 23 Brühl Germany
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trying to safe the world, just haven't figured out how to do it yet :D ;) and oh yeah, totaly crazy, but please, be my guest, find out yourself :D

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May 09 2008 - 5:44 PM PST
crosstheline
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banakiwi
So thanks for the comment. It's sad that it was how you put it "long over due." But our world is afraid of a little truth.
April 29 2008 - 5:09 PM PST
jedl0ver93
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banakiwi
omg i ahve crazy dreams to and my friends can back me up on that -- very crazy and vivid....... miss talking to you send me a message!
April 20 2008 - 7:36 AM PST
serenasnows
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Ha I believed this actually happened to you until you said it was just a dream. Wow that was really freaky.
April 20 2008 - 7:32 AM PST
serenasnows
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Ha I believed this actually happened to you until you said it was just a dream. Wow that was really freaky.
April 18 2008 - 7:43 PM PST
jadebug
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banakiwi
awww thanks for all the comments. I do appreciate them! :) I know life doesn't suck but it's not all that great pretty often, but hey that's life...hehe still happy and smiling tho don't worry lol
April 18 2008 - 3:13 PM PST
AtimeArhyme
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banakiwi
you have thee kewlest name eeeever
April 17 2008 - 6:23 PM PST
wolvenlight
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What is the huge building at the end? It's really cool looking!
April 17 2008 - 1:43 PM PST
crosstheline
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You have some of the most unusal dreams I have ever heard of, then again, I don't think any dreams are NORMAL, last time I checked anyway. I hate in your dreams how you can never run fasts. Its all like slow-mode.
April 16 2008 - 6:21 PM PST
thatonegirl
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banakiwi
Vincent, Thank you for your comments, you're real sweet. :) And yes, the truth lies in the rubble of our own "construction site", if you will. Let's just hope someone won't expose the child within. Best, Stacey
April 16 2008 - 4:11 PM PST
wolvenlight
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Even though they're short both of these poems sound good- and they balance eachother out, it's nice contrast.
April 13 2008 - 4:04 PM PST
serenasnows
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Aww this is so sweet. This was an interesting idea. I mean everytime someone would hug one of you guys their whole face would light up. Why did you it ? I like the conscept.
April 08 2008 - 3:52 PM PST
serenasnows
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banakiwi
What does your username stand for?
April 08 2008 - 12:56 PM PST
serenasnows
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Keep smiling!? KEEP SMILING?! That is my line!!!! It's okay you're nice ---- you can keep it.:)
April 01 2008 - 3:14 PM PST
serenasnows
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That is strange. How do you think those animals got into your dream.
March 22 2008 - 6:41 AM PST
missyme
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banakiwi
yea. i like the summer time way more that this snow we are getting in the beginning of spring. ouch. =[ so how are you?

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the thriller

April 18, 2008

Well, what can i say...here is another one:
I'm at home, and my brother, my sister and my mother, we are driving to a shopping mall to visit someone...well, actually, we have never met him, but we know he is in danger and we drive over there to warn him. (my brother is some kind of detective, he always carries his pen, some papers and his backpack with him) Well, we drive to the parking and park our car, saying we're happy not to have someone with us...cause this someone would cause a lot of trouble. After parking the car and walking a little while, we rent a car (yeah, don't ask me ^^) and drive to another parking which is even closer at the mall. Before we reach the parking we take a wrong turn and are driving up some stairs, with many people on them...the way to the mall. We figure out (wooaa^^) that cars aren't allowed here from a sign which says only pedestrians may walk here, so yeah, we drive back and park the car in the old parking garage of the old part of the shopping center. The old part looks really nice, on the left side there is a small building, surrounded by trees, a meadow and a bit of water, it looks really idyllic. On our right side is a big block of concret, the new parking garage with a lot of places for cars....A LOT. It's HUGE.
Next thing i remember is we are in an office of someone, well, of the person we wanted to warn that an assasination is planned on him. He is some kind of manager of the shopping center or something. He has never seen us, but he immediately believes us. We check his drawers while he is gone talking to his secretary. He wants to cancel all his appointments. We can see him through a "look-through-mirror". ^^ In his office, right next to his desk, there is a table set with dishes and delicious looking food. Suddenly someone enters, his assistant he tells us. He also tells us that Mr. i don't know...the manager should drink this glas of orange juice, because he normaly doesn't drink enough and if he drinks something special, he'll get even more thirsty, so he should absolutely drink this glas of orange juice. We wonder silently, but tell the man we will give the manager the message and so he leaves. The manager returns from his secretary, closes all the doors and we tell him that his assistant brought the glass of orange juice.
We sit at the table, some more people, confidants of the manager are sitting with us. We eat a lot and talk about the plans of the evil i don't know, Mafia? ^^ to kill the manager. All of a sudden we notice that the assistant of the manager isn't around, and that his chair is empty. Also, after drinking the glass of orange juice, there is left a small amount of white powder on the bottom of the glass. All of a sudden the manager wants to call a certain number with his cellphone and tell someone on the end of the line everything he knows. So we figure the assistant is really working for the mafia and he slipt him some kind of truth serum or something like that. Luckily the confidants of the manager keep him from calling this number and lock him away for his own safety/his own good.
Well, we're again outside the office of the manager, somewhere in a park and are on our way back. My father joined us after he finished work. It's a bit a rainy day, and we're walking back then i suddenly see an Kindergarten teacher who used to be head in my group then i worked there. I pray she won't see me, cause she was a real witch. Always speaking with a splitted/sharp tongue. Well, she doesn't see me, but the kids who are with her see me and shout out my name and are really happy to see me. Ofc i'm happy to see them, but i really hate this kindergarten teacher, and i totaly don't trust her. Ofc she is immediately very nice and very questioning. She asks us all kind of stuff, where we have been, what we have been doing and so on and so on. We answer with half of the truth, we tell her we were having breakfast at a bed and breakfast and are now on our way home. We reach the kindergarten and she offers my parents some coffee...i stay outside with the children. My brother is sitting inside at first, but i see how he wants to go out but doesn't dare. So i call him (i'm afraid he might tell her the truth about what we did, after she won him over) to come outside. Now the kindergarten teacher gets very angry and starts to shout at my brother that he has to stay inside and he is really confused about what to do or who to listen too. After i have convinced my brother he hasn't to listen to the kindergarten teacher, she totaly flips and slams her hand on the tube, screaming loud. I know for sure she is working with the enemy and just flips like that cause she sees her only chance to get to know what really happened been taken away from her. Here ends my dream...i don't know what happened to the manager, or the assistant, or the Kindergarten teacher. I woke up to soon.
Another freaking part of dream...
I am in belgium, at my uncles. I moved out, and my uncle is claiming my old room for himself. He tells me though he always hears some kind of humming. I think he is crazy, and as he starts telling me he thinks maybe rats live under the roof i don't just think that, i tell him he actually is. I just guess he hears the humming from outside, cause in front of the window always fly some insects along. All of a sudden a HUGE wesp-like creature/insect sits on his face. It's humming really loud, and my uncle closes his eyes and tries to get the animal off his face, cause we both know that it has a huge stinger/spike/barb/prick (i don't know the actual word) which could inflict serious damage if the wespsomething would sting my uncle in the face. After feeling around for the wesp/walking leaf for a while, he finaly gets it into his hand and we both look at it. It's really huge, cause the end of it's body sticks out of the fist of my uncle, and the head sticks out on the top of the fist of my uncle. We discuss if we should kill it or not, and then decide to let it free, cause the animal can't do anything about it being inside the house. So we open the window and let it fly, being totaly aware of the fact that an insect this huge must be a queen and we sure will see more of her in the future.