This is a wonderful piece. It has a lot going on in it and though I don't know what's REALLY going on with her, I don't NEED to know...I still feel the pain of the situation. More comments in a message I'm about to send, :-)

nice, yeah that little bambi came into my yard and I played with him for like an hour. It was crazy. I've never played with a deer before. Their cool though

I saw a screening and it is amazing! I hope you will see it when it's released in December 2008!!

Something eerily haunting about this image,very intriguing!

haha yes white water rafting.
i'm very very scared.
hopefully--- it will be an eye opening experience. :D

Don't kill me, but I'm an English professor, so tweaked some comma and spelling things..........again, this was really good. It's scary to read something to mature from someone so young...good angst...good talent.


Time is only an object in her eyes.
She races through its endless vortex,
never realizing that it won't always be forever.
Falling hard onto the pavement, she finally opens her eyes.
What has she become? A monster of herself.
Too frightened to move forward, she is stuck,
frozen to the ground, but time still rushes forward.
Time is no longer an object she realizes.
But by now, it has all slipped through her fingertips.
Now she has nothing except the monster
she created.

painful and stark and real.

aside from some spelling errors, this is short and SO to the point....it made me hurt to read it.

thanks for stopping by, :-)

i plan to reread the bell jar this summer....loved it when i read it a WHILE ago.

VERY beautiful. nice work.

wow that is so trippy!
i thought it was aflower at first, but i looked at it closer, and it was a beautiful butterfly!
how incredible!


With Love;
^^**shannon*^^