This is Perfect for Your Procrastination

Jun 09, 2008 - 22:05 PM PST
So instead of actually being productive and working on my poetry final, I ended up just reading through some old poems, written in a time I can hardly remember.
I know I have mentioned it before, but sometimes when I re-read things I have written I have to wonder, "What was I thinking?"

In this specific instance, I had re-read this poem several times prior to this evening and wondered what on earth it meant. How could I not remember what the poem was supposed to mean?! I wrote it!!

Tonight I got it. All of the sudden, it all just clicked and I realized what it was.
Can you figure it out?

" Watch
His Wide Face
Full of Answers
You Don't Want to See.
Time
Stands Still
When Holding
His Hands Can't
Hold on Forever-
He'll Simply Break.
Fly
By Without Notice
Ignore his warnings
He only ever Screams
How much you
waste away. "

This is Perfect for Your Procrastination


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Jun 10, 2008 - 16:05 PM

yeletihw on
Sounds like your fighting with your man and he has excuses, but you don't want to hear them. You love him, but he wants to leave..no matter how much love you give him.

I really like. "He only screams how much you waste away."
I'm all about endings, and that is a beautiful ending.