8 Comments

hil

Awesome song. I love the mellow beginning and how it picks up at the chorus, great job! :)

toasterheadtil

Really nice- sexy.

crosstheline

Thats pretty good if you wrote that song in one night. I have a hard time writing songs...

MustLoveMusic

Wow, you wrote that? It's really, really good! I'd buy it if it was on itunes! You have an awesome voice. I like to sing, too, but I can't write a song to save my life. I think I'll just stick with poems =) Anyway, really great job!

faerye

this was really sweet.. good job, just work on the tuning of your voice