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The_Catalyst | Ashtabula, OH • United States , Age 19

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Roll On

Title: Roll On

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Added: 03-17-2008

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Franchise

Mar 29, 2008 - 00:45 AM

I liked the slam of piano keys at key moments in the poem. The poem rolls on and yet has subtle pauses in it. A work of irony.

lilsey

Mar 28, 2008 - 14:47 PM

ditto jacy!!!

jacy

Mar 28, 2008 - 13:08 PM

I like!

cegm

Mar 21, 2008 - 00:56 AM

I'd say.. in order. I like this roll on. then trains, then fishing for singles, then secret.
Secret, I'd say needs some tweeking, in where you make the breaks & start again. But all in all -
All are of good performance. Great work.
You definately have the talent for Live shows, and expression. look foward to more.
Good night, Cat. & Nice chat. : )