I'm not sure if you like Bright Eyes, but regardless of your choice on this band or not, my comment continues. Your voice in this reminds me so much of the beginning of the song "At The Bottom Of Everything". If you have listened to it, I think that you should make a video of you retelling the story at the beginning of the song. If you haven't heard it, listen to it please and then make a video of you retelling the story.

I like that both options include your poetic retelling.