lochnesimpostr | Hilliard, OH  • United States , Age 17

a poem that i wrote a long time ago



Dec 30, 2007 - 22:23 PM PST

For my brother

In the past a memory
upon a sun soaked beach
down by the sand dunes
underneath the rolling waves
That's where I'll wait for you and
our childhood past times to begin.

Title: a poem that i wrote a long time ago
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Jan 25, 2008 - 20:47 PM
it has nice descriptive details in it. i like it

Dec 31, 2007 - 11:20 AM
I like it.

Short, sweet, and to the point

Good stuff.

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