BriteEyez | Pittsburgh, PA  • United States , Age 24

Childhood



Jan 30, 2008 - 21:13 PM PST

Did you ever wish that you were a kid again? I always do. When I'm surrounded by friends, I'm too caught up in the moment to think about it. But when I am alone I catch myself sitting and wistfully thinking about how easy it was to be a kid. When I was a kid I remember always being happy. Ya know? Back before you faced the harsh reality of life. "Disappointment" was merely a word you had heard in passing but didn't know the meaning of. You had no stress and no responsibilities. Life was carefree, and everyone seemed happy. Maybe it was just the whole "ignorance is bliss" thing. Whatever it was I would gratefully go back if I could borrow someone's Delorean. I miss those days now. It's funny how you don't realize how fast life goes, and you don't appreciate all the little things until you look back.



"Childhood"
Lemon Pez and Fun Dip
and playing in the snow.
Toothless grins set across messy faces.
Little fingers grasp at big ideas.
The concept of Truth
transcends lack of knowledge.
Playing at "grown up",
the gradual loss of innocence transpires a wish to go back.
Back in life and back in time,
Back when things were easy, and worries few.
Childhood dreams replaced by the excitement of an uncertain future.

(please don't make fun of my first attempt at poetry)





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Sep 17, 2008 - 11:08 AM
Your first? You got prose down pat :) It's way harder in my opinion to make a poem sound well structured without the monotony of AA BB rhyme schemes. Sometimes we poets use those rhyme schemes as crutches and limits our way to express ourselves poetically. You put some deep emotions and contemplative thoughts on paper. Thank you for sharing them with us.

Mar 24, 2008 - 08:00 AM
I know what you mean! If you get ahold of a Delorean let me know. I wanna go back to my childhood, but know what I know now. That way everyone will get all freaked out when I drop some calculus on my 3rd grade math teacher. Plus - free poptarts and classic Nintendo.

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