Feelgood



Aug 15, 2008 - 05:33 AM PST

as the sun sets
a soulful song fades in
from static on the old car radio
the music fills her to the brim
like a tall glass of lemonade
drowning out all but a whisper
from the rain
for the first time in a long time
she truly feels at peace with her life
she laughs
it tickles a little.

Title: Feelgood
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Added: 08-15-2008
Channel: Poetry
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Votes: 3
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Aug 29, 2008 - 15:29 PM
yea thats was nice i really liked dat, how long did it take?

Aug 17, 2008 - 21:27 PM
i like this
the last line gives it this certain feel, i can't quite explain...anyone know what i mean?
it's a particular writing style- you are good at it.
keep it up :]

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