writergirl01 | Rancho Cucamonga, CA  • United States , Age 19
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Iris



Mar 24, 2008 - 19:33 PM PST

There is something about eyes
That draws me in; keeps me there
It's tempting, he's haunting.

They are swollen and dark,
Or crystalline sky blue,
And a faded minty green:
Cats' eyes.

There is something about eyes
That captures who we are
In one tiny, round burst
Looked up inside of
Our most delicate possession.

Title: Iris
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Added: 03-24-2008
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Mar 27, 2008 - 01:40 AM
Ditto. The way the details are presented really draw you in, much like being drawn into somebody's eyes in real life. Great.

Mar 26, 2008 - 21:52 PM
I really liked this. It's so true. I was really drawn in when reading it. Good job.

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