Devious | Argyle, TX  • United States , Age 16

Lost at Sea.



Feb 23, 2008 - 12:16 PM PST


My life is mediocre,

I feel that nothing i do is important.

I'm starting to find that the people I once knew are changing and drifting.

Is it really my friends that are drifting,

or is it me?

I've completely forgotten

what it feels like to walk on land.

I feel like i could capsize at any given moment.

And as i sail through the storm

I have no idea

where I'm going.

What I'm supposed to do.

I feel confined in this sea of vagueness


Title: Lost at Sea.
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Added: 02-23-2008
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Mar 09, 2008 - 17:40 PM
I feel like this way alot

Feb 27, 2008 - 16:22 PM
I feel this way sometimes, too, most often when I'm alone at home. But rather than admit to it, I make sure to appear confident and happy with how things are. Being unsure of what's going to happen is scary. I love the honesty and openness of this. Pieces of writing that reveal true character are the best. You can connect to them, and that's what makes them memorable. (:

Feb 26, 2008 - 09:15 AM
Have you read Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury? I think you'd like it from what I see here :]

"I feel confined in this sea of vagueness"<--My favorite line

Feb 25, 2008 - 12:04 PM
"I've completely forgotten what it feels like to walk on land." i like this line. dont give up.

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