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Love in a carnivorous wedding



Mar 07, 2008 - 23:41 PM PST

drawn in
angel cave
coppery smelters
the smelting sky
smelting ingots in the sun
global warming in the trees
ingot ghosts
catching ghoti in the lake
catching inghosts in the sky, in the winter sky with its heaven flashing, with the dead bars of gold, and the old goals of ghosts

Love in a carnivorous wedding
Love and the alien swastika
(cue Love American Style theme)

the vivid rednecks
the clinical rednex
rednexus
Kim's trilogy: Sexus, Lexus and Texus
rednecks redux

disciples on the coffee
the orange marine
the orange submarine
there's marines then there's submarines
and everyone else is corporal

violators will be violated
trespassers will be violated

psychic rangers
pyrrhic rangers

marines and their subhuman violence
marines and their subhuman vehemence
the will to engage a carnage god
the secretary's moles commence

1.
They turn you into a mouse, lengthen your lifespan, provide you with the cancer drugs, and when you're restored to your human form you're much older, but you'll live longer and your cancer is all gone, and you love cheese.

2.
They nailed gravity to the wall, put him on the stand to answer for all his crimes against humanity. Gravity sat paring his nails, blowing, staring stoically at the class action lawyer, weighed down with fetters and chains, lest he anger Gravity with his examination and force the old boy to reverse himself.

3.
There's a gray oatmeal baby. It swims through the sky filtering pollution from the mists. Weird genetic chimera everywhere -- tentacle children, anemone babies, husbands with ten thousand arms, a bicycle bleats for two.

this is a caged green angel
this is a carbon monopolis
this is a carnage religion

a caged green religion
a graygreen rebellion
a graygreen angel, caged, blinking, singing
like a Hopkins skylark

Title: Love in a carnivorous wedding
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Added: 03-07-2008
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Mar 12, 2008 - 21:28 PM
I agree --great word structure! I was just thinking about "Love American Style" just last week nostalgically.

Mar 08, 2008 - 09:53 AM
Hey, I think this is pretty stellar! The word play is fun to read, and the structure is interesting. Also I am kind of in love with "gray oatmeal baby" and "tentacle children, anemone babies, husbands with ten thousand arms, a bicycle bleats for two."

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