xuhlozr | Mc Keesport, PA  • United States , Age 17

Poetry



Mar 01, 2008 - 15:16 PM PST

Hold my head up high
Trying not to cry
The past always creeps up on me
Beating me up inside
The lightning in my brain
Leaves me in shock, almost insane
When will this pain be tamed?
Will this feeling ever fade away?

Am I living a normal life,
Is everything alright?
Never smileing, never fake
Always real everyday.
People ask "is she okay?"
Sure she is, just let her pay.

Is this what we call "paying the price"
The price of pain is just too much
(Just let go of yesterday, everything will be okay)
Letting go is all too hard
Just push through, life goes on.

Title: Poetry
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Added: 03-01-2008
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Mar 03, 2008 - 04:59 AM
It's not rare that you find poems that you can undoubtedly relate to in some way, especially if they are vague. Your poem though, even though I don't relate to it, is so dedicated to you because you wrote it, I love it. Even people who don't really know you well read this, they're going to tell that there was true meaning behind it. Great job, I'd love to see you write more.

I love the flow, but above that I love the meaning and how much I can tell this is truly you.

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