pilgrimOmega | Regina, NY  • Canada , Age 39

Superbloggers...the trailer.



Dec 10, 2007 - 18:15 PM PST

I know that this isn't what most of you expect or want for this series. I am just writing through stuff right now, trying to find a tone and a way to proceed.

I wrote this as a teaser trailer type of thing. I know, reading it...it's dark. Not a lot of room for humor, you might be thinking. But I really do have this feeling that if I write the drama parts with honesty and reality as the basis for it, the funny stuff will be funnier.

Or not. Time will tell and the beauty of it is you can write and rewrite until it's right. Right?



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Dec 11, 2007 - 20:46 PM
Well written. You introduce the guy, that he "goes out at night" (and what he does), and the superheroes blog/vlog. Any chance of getting the access to police intel idea into this trailer / 1st evening: another monitor maybe, or couple of screen windows with hints? Excellent writing.

Dec 10, 2007 - 18:34 PM
I love it...but then I know what you are doing...hehe

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